Can you improve on this paragraph?

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edited March 2016 in Writing

Question: The legal age for driving should be lowered.

There are several problems with this student's paragraph.  Can you correct it?

Driving car is one of the convenient way to travel, but how old should a person be allowed to drive is a topic widely discussed.  Some people think younger people can drive a car very well, but other people believe lower age driver involves so many accident, they should be given license after they are older than 18 years old.  In my opinion, the legal age for driving should be lower.

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