Body Paragraphs: A key to success
Body Paragraphs: Extending Your Point
A lot of students have difficulty extending or expanding their paragraphs. How can this problem be fixed? Well, it’s simple: in the body paragraphs, you should make a statement and then give an example.
Consider this sentence: “I had a nice weekend.”
This is a statement about a person’s weekend. He/she has stated that ‘it was nice’. But how nice? Well, in order to know the answer to this, further examples/explanations must be given.
“I had a nice weekend. On Friday night I had a lovely dinner with my family and on Saturday night I went to a party. On Sunday, I went to the beach.”
Now I can understand what is meant by, “I had a nice weekend”. The examples/further explanations help me understand in more detail.
Your IELTS Task 2 answer is the same. Consider this statement from a student:
The problem with this sentence is the reader does not know any details about why adults learn more effectively. So, an example must be added: